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I should have set my mind on the sun instead of the stars because the sun shines brighter, bigger, longer.
There's a piece of you in my heart, beating with the blood I carry through these veins and it keeps me alive. I want to make every second last because this sorrow is something that will drown me down below where fallen angels lay. I kiss your lips and whisper "Tomorrow is what makes us want to wait for a better ending."
We're not following their footsteps we're making a dream come true. I feel weightless, over this sky where I watch you smile up at me. Yes this is us in a time vortex, where we're going no where but tomorrow.
And we lay below the stars and wait for tomorrow so we can make a wish on the sun.
There's a piece of you in my heart, beating with the blood I carry through these veins and it keeps me alive. I want to make every second last because this sorrow is something that will drown me down below where fallen angels lay. I kiss your lips and whisper "Tomorrow is what makes us want to wait for a better ending."
We're not following their footsteps we're making a dream come true. I feel weightless, over this sky where I watch you smile up at me. Yes this is us in a time vortex, where we're going no where but tomorrow.
And we lay below the stars and wait for tomorrow so we can make a wish on the sun.
First, lemme take a selfie
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I like it, it's different and unquie and kinda pretty in it's own way. It makes me wonder if we should wish on the sun instead of stars. But, if one wishes on the sun why can't we wish on the moon also? One must think it will live as long or longer than the sun since it isn't 'destined to explode'. Sorry, I might be being to insightful for this but it crossed my mind when reading this. So, do we wish on the sun or the moon? Hm probably the sun though still right? Because, the sun is still brighter andstuff. But, I don't know I will finally end this question. I love this poem I like I love all your other poems<3